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Today we had to do our term three goal reflections then once we finished it we had to put in a picture of ourselves.Then we had to post it to our blog.I put in Fitness/P.E as my highlight.
Kia ora Molly, I can see that you have set a great goal for term 4? What can you do that will help you achieve this goal? Maybe you could add a bit more into your slide and it will update the blog post. I like your photo. It advertises yourself positively online. from Mrs Torrie
kia ora. My name is Mitchell and I go to Mangapapa school in Gisborne, and I really like how you used your face in the photo and maybe you can write some more for you goal.
Kia ora Molly my name is Millan, I am a year 6 Mangapapa student. I can see that you have set your goals for this term. When you say I need to get better at writing you stumped me on this, what do you mean by this and what do you need to do in your writing to make it better? Maybe you update this and say what fix-ups your writing needs?
Kai ora Molly my name is Kiara. I go to Waitohu school in Otaki. I liked the way when you said that you like to do fitness and P.E because I also like doing fitness and P.E too. Maybe you could put some fullstops at the end of you sentence. When did you do this?
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments: Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let me know that you have read, watched or listened to my blog Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question
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Kia ora Molly,
ReplyDeleteI can see that you have set a great goal for term 4? What can you do that will help you achieve this goal? Maybe you could add a bit more into your slide and it will update the blog post.
I like your photo. It advertises yourself positively online.
from Mrs Torrie
kia ora. My name is Mitchell and I go to Mangapapa school in Gisborne, and I really like how you used your face in the photo and maybe you can write some more for you goal.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Molly my name is Millan, I am a year 6 Mangapapa student. I can see that you have set your goals for this term. When you say I need to get better at writing you stumped me on this, what do you mean by this and what do you need to do in your writing to make it better? Maybe you update this and say what fix-ups your writing needs?
ReplyDeleteKai ora Molly my name is Kiara. I go to Waitohu school in Otaki.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way when you said that you like to do fitness and P.E because I also like doing fitness and P.E too.
Maybe you could put some fullstops at the end of you sentence.
When did you do this?